
Teaching primary school students in Singapore to excel in Chinese composition requires a structured approach tailored to the PSLE marking criteria and local curriculum expectations. Here are 5 key steps to help them achieve high scores:
- Master the Exam Requirements & Structure
Understand the format: Most compositions require a narrative (记叙文) based on picture prompts, with a 150–300 word range.
Analyze themes: Focus on common PSLE topics like friendship, family, honesty, or overcoming challenges, which often emphasize moral values.
Practice past papers: Use past exam questions to familiarize students with prompts and time constraints.
Tip: Teach students to identify the central conflict in picture prompts and link it to a meaningful resolution (e.g., learning a lesson).
- Build Vocabulary & Grammar Foundations
Thematic word lists: Create lists of high-scoring phrases for emotions (感动, 兴奋), actions (急忙, 鼓励), and sensory details (阳光明媚, 气喘吁吁).
Use idioms (成语) and proverbs: Incorporate age-appropriate ones like “一分耕耘,一分收获” to add depth.
Avoid errors: Drill common mistakes (e.g., confusing 的/得/地) and practice sentence structures (e.g., “不但…而且…”).
Resource: Use Singaporean-approved textbooks 欢乐伙伴 for contextual examples.
- Teach a Clear Composition Structure
Introduction (开头): Start with a vivid setting (时间、地点、人物) using descriptive language.
Example: “一个炎热的下午,我和弟弟在公园里玩耍。”
Middle (经过): Develop the plot with a problem-solution flow. Use connectors like “突然” or “接着” for coherence.
Conclusion (结尾): Reflect on the lesson learned (e.g., “这次经历让我明白了友情的重要”).
Activity: Use story maps or the 4W1H method (Who, When, Where, What, How) to outline plots.
PS:the structure I teach for all my students are simple to understand and use.
Use the 七段式 approach:
- 开头 —— 点出主题,引人入胜
- 起 —— 介绍人物/背景(主要是要有几时?谁?在哪里?和做什么?四个重要因素)
*其他因素在第一段没那么重要! - 承 —— 事情发展(写问题一)
- 转 —— 事情高潮/转折(写出解决问题的方法和过程)
- 合 —— 结尾
- 总结感想 —— 升华主题
- 艺术加工 —— 有能力就 加入 (A)好词佳句, (B)成语, (C)比喻句、拟人句,(D)对话或 (E)回忆增加感染力。
- Enhance Creativity with Vivid Details
Show, don’t tell: Replace “我很高兴” with “我高兴得跳了起来,脸上露出了灿烂的笑容.”
Add dialogue: Use speech bubbles (e.g., “妈妈温柔地说:‘下次要小心哦!’”) to make stories dynamic.
Sensory descriptions: Include sights, sounds, and feelings (e.g., “风吹过树叶,发出沙沙的声音”).
Practice: Rewrite simple sentences using adjectives/adverbs (e.g., “他跑” → “他飞快地奔向教室”).
- Regular Practice & Targeted Feedback
Write weekly: Assign timed essays under exam conditions (40–50 minutes).
Review model compositions: Analyze high-scoring essays to identify strengths (e.g., clear climax, emotional impact).
Provide feedback: Highlight 1–2 areas for improvement per draft (e.g., “Add more dialogue here” or “Use a better idiom”).
Tool: Use checklists for self-editing (e.g., “Did I include a lesson learned?”).
Bonus Tips for Singaporean Students
Read widely: Encourage reading 《逗号》 or local publications like 《大拇指》 for culturally relevant content.
大拇指 is here :https://www.zaobao.com.sg/keywords/da-mu-zhi
逗号 is here : https://www.zbschools.sg/
other reading material is
作文群英2024 https://www.shhk.com.sg/wp-content/uploads/2024/08/2024-Zuo-Wen-Qun-Ying.pdf
听《星空下》新加坡歌谣作品(华文歌曲)欣赏 – https://www.cpcll.sg/xinkongxia
Time management: Spend 5–10 minutes planning, 25–30 minutes writing, and 5 minutes proofreading.
Leverage school resources: Use MOE-approved platforms like Student Learning Space (SLS) for interactive practice.
By combining strong fundamentals, creative expression, and exam-specific strategies, students can consistently produce high-scoring compositions. Consistency and constructive feedback are key! 📚✨